Comments on: Chapters 6-8

By: Eddie Delgado

Eddie Delgado — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 16:30:12 +0000

Chapter 7
At niht when cole satisfied with the wood he picked up.He felt an anger when he saw th bear.cole woke cause he was hungry.after he ate the bear came back and he got mad.

By: S@m@NtH@ BrY@nT

S@m@NtH@ BrY@nT — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 16:28:08 +0000

the fight of life or death

cole ran in to the spirit bear once again cole made its way to the bear cole tried to fight back but the he was no match for the spirit bear blow after blow the bear was ripping him a part like a like brith day gife cole lade on the ground after the mowling from the spirit bear cole had snaped ribs and lost feeling in one of his arms cole lade helpless with sharp pains thinking to himself “why wasn’t the bear scared” thoughts troubled him then cole felt as if he need to throw up then he put his head to the side a vomit the smell of his own vomit and death was in the air cole had black spots dance across his vision then he lost consciousness when cole awoke thoughts came over him about how he was going to die alone

By: jericka

jericka — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 16:21:43 +0000

cole`s arms roughly but then let go his anger and coles daddy was beating him down to the ground and cole`s father jumped to his feet and put the feather in his face

By: M@RI@H

M@RI@H — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 16:17:30 +0000

COLE GETS IN A LITTLE FIGHT W/HIS DAD!!THEN COLE WANT TO THE LAND SO HE WOUNLD NOT HAVE TO GO TO JAIL. BUT WHEN HE GETS TO THE LAND HE HAS NOTHING TO EAT SO HE HAS GO LOOK FOR STUFF.THIS IS WHEN HE SEE THE SPIRIT BEAR AND THE BEAR IS ATTACKING HIM AND HE IS SAYING NO,NO MORE!!!

By: marshall cabrera

marshall cabrera — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 16:13:00 +0000

cole is on an island and wants to escape but he swims during high tide.he almost kills him self by drowning.then he sees a spirit bear and he tries to kill it.but the bear almost kills him.

By: shaquiin

shaquiin — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 14:07:06 +0000

Cole is on the island alone and he tries 2 escape the island by swimming away.But he leaves during high tide. He almost drowns.Then he falls asleep, wakes up and sees a spirit bear.They start 2 fight after a while cole scream,”No more.

By: JaMeS

JaMeS — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 14:06:21 +0000

cole ses that the spirit bear moved like a ghost through such tangled forest. cole was unable to find much wood and cole flung the spear with all his strength to kill.

ch.6,7,8 mad

By: jennifer

jennifer — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 14:04:07 +0000

♥chapter 8♥
♥the bear attached cole when coles body went week the bear had attached him and hurt him badly♥:( booo hoo!

By: jennifer

jennifer — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 14:03:34 +0000

♥chapter 8♥
♥the bear attached cole when coles body went week the bear had attached him and hurt him badly♥:(

By: BrItTaNy.♥

BrItTaNy.♥ — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 14:02:14 +0000

chapter 8.♥
cole had got attached by the spirit bear and he had got week some how and the bear had clawed his chesed and made him even weeker then he was.